People argue whether it is hard work or luck that contributes to success. What is your opinion?
There is a quote that says, 'Luck can be defeated, but not Hard work'. Yes this quote very well connects with the topic where hard work is always essential for person's success than Luck. Many inspirational stories and people are famous only because of hard-work but not of Luck.
To begin with, Hard work is closely knitted with many tiny things such as, continues learning, proper planning, dedication, time-management and mainly consistancy. Success is always associated with these qualities but not merely a luck. For example, Edison's great invention of light came through several hard works, setbacks, failures and consistant effort throughout his discovery. He proudly said that I had learned 10,000 different ways of not doing it' after his final great invention after several failed attempts.
On the other hand, Luck only plays a small role in any journey towards success. We heard only a very few achievers with only luck as a soul factor. Luck will not help one in gaining learning, character building and experience as hard-work does with a person through his journey towards success. We are getting paid by our employer only for our work not for luck. Anything that comes without hard-work will not sustain for a long.
To conclude, Hard-work is the main factor which contributes to success. Hence the consistent effort really plays a key role and a salt of person's success with a little or no luck in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98319327731 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56259811843 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0521808466 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289595595373 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120910729467 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754902983783 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201088090888 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072771979233 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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