Environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems? Who do u think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the government's, organization or each individual?
In this day and age, an environmental problem has become a controversial debate among public all around the world.Some people believe that governments and institutions have to tackle environmental problems while opponents think each people should protect environment individually.This essay will illustrate both views.
To begin with, there are several ways to solve this issue. First and foremost is that the governments play a pivotal role to reduce pollution in worldwide. In other words, factories and companies which relies on carbon dioxide to the atmosphere should be fine by a government. A group of researchers of Tehran University conducted a study about people of countries which living near the factories that produce green hoses gases three times more likely to suffer from many kinds of cancer, blood cancer, for instance. Therefore, it is highly obvious that if governments do not control the emission, the environment will be more polluted.
however, people play a key role to reduce pollution.That is to say, people have to help nations to protect our planet from pollution for next-generation. for example, one way is that commuter should be used public transport system to reduce air pollution. In addition, fossil fuels going to be finished so using user-friendly source energy not only useful for present people, but also necessary for next generation.
In conclusion, althoug governments play a key role to reduce pollution all around the world, people individually are responsible to help nations to protect our planet.people and governments should go hand in hand to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40711462451 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08782434548 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2967889233 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3 7.25397266985 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182957864445 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697695007013 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525033909779 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11198918793 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042296282046 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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