Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be achieved at government level.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
It seems that it is very hard to resolve the environmental issues by individuals, while the real change just can be done by the governmental power. Although this statement considered as a constructive opinion by a considerable number of people, there are many people that hold an opposing viewpoint. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this topic.
To begin with, There are various abilities at government level that make it capable to solve the environmental problems. At first, the companies are the main reason for environmental pollution like sea pollution that is very harmful to sea creatures. The governments by making rules and legal actions can reduce or prevent the environmental damages. For example, many factories are pouring their wastewater into rivers every day and the governments are powerful to stay against them.
In addition, Although the governments have themselves negative effect to the environment by producing the greenhouses, The air pollution is an issue That cultural programs from governments can inform people of their bad behavior that can increase it. For instance, The governments should encourage people to less use of their personal cars by offering the cheapest travels with public vehicles such as subway and bus.
In conclusion, While there are several compelling arguments on managing the environmental problems, my personal sentiment is that issues can be solved only by government activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34632034632 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02249457785 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7558739399 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228116452177 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881516902421 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450494362093 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135068543946 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304131459077 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.