Environmental problems are too serious for individuals to solve and only big companies/governments can solve them. Do you agree or disagree
The debate regarding environmental problems can only solve by governments, not by individuals is an old one, with shifting attitudes of people over the years. Proponents and opponents make their own cases to support their views regarding this unresolved issue. I think that, both individuals and governments have their own responsibilities regarding this problem.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoint, but the most important factor to be considered is the negative impacts of these environmental issues. In other words, peoples are suffering from many health issues because of vehicle and other industrial emissions. Statistics from credible sources revealed that, the global temperature is increasing day by day as a result of deforestation. To elaborate further, few pertinent examples can be taken into consideration. Countries like Maldives, Sri Lanka and Bangladesh are facing the threat of sea level rising which occurs as a side effect of global warming.
On the other side of the fence, it is also possible to make an opposing case. It can be argued that, individuals are not responsible for these environmental problems. Critics also believe that, governments can play important roles in solving issues rather than individuals. However, those who advocate this viewpoint, fail to see the picture in large context.
In conclusion, it seems fair and justifiable to say that both individuals and governments have equal responsibilities regarding this important issue
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| 2019-10-13 | sanduni jayasekara | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61674008811 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19282074204 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643171806167 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1277727101 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174262132474 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597568901668 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748391066842 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103508937944 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610481782021 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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