Recently, we have witnessed increased participation and popularities in unconventional extreme sports. With the rise in this increased interest, Proponents are debating over its dangerous and fatal health severities and proposed a ban on such sporting activities. While others hold opposite views stating that we should encourage such sports and active participation in it, as they believe that it installed risk-taking mindsets and make them brave by embracing their fears. In this article, I will analyze both the positive and negative influence of such sports before deriving an appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, there are enormous advantages of extreme sports like skiing, river rafting, and hiking the mountains. First, in simulates risk-taking abilities in the participants eradicate their fear, moreover, there are many health and fitness benefits of such sports. For instance, various researches in this area have proved that persons taking an active part in extreme sports tend to become more successful in life in both personal and professional lives as compared to those who have not participated in such sports.
On the other hand, there are negligible downsides of such sports, it can be dangerous, harmful, and life threating. For instance, recently there has been a mammoth amount of injuries and in some cases, death to participants are registered. Furthermore, such sports are exorbitantly expensive, thus, all sections of society cannot enjoy the thrill associated with it.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that extreme sports have numerous benefits and should not be prohibited, however, if not performed with adequate safety, can be dangerous and fatal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95251438636 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7967121415 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18380794368 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728624575739 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080622618615 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117658026695 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518823261407 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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