Gambling is an activity which causes more harm than good and so should be made illegal in all countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? give reasons and example to support to your response.
The gambling is a game play by betting of anything. In past years the people are more addicted in gambling games because it is more interesting to play continuously.
According, to this game so many family got suffered and even some family commit to suicide because of the addiction of game, this game make betting of money, assets, jewellery etc. when they lose money and everything even though the addiction people can’t out of that game.
The person who lose or win, the gambler never stop his game he always think about winning. But, in some case if he get failure by loosing his money he was under stress so that he can addict to drugs and alcohol. From this substance which made to relax but the reality is he will affect physically and financially and also they treat bad with close friend’s and family who are trying to help them.
However, by playing game it increases the brain function activity, thinking power and concentration. Anyhow the extreme level of game make risk to him and family. Still some luxurious people are playing gambling games which was authorized government, for example casino which is one of the popular gambling place.
Nowadays, government band many gambling places due to causes of public welfare, mainly focusing on middle class and low class people stuck in to this game.
In conclusion, the actual winner in gambling is those who conducting the game he gained money. Finely, the looser is gambler they lost all physical and mental.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
...ntinuously. According, to this game so many family got suffered and even some family commi...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...e gambler never stop his game he always think about winning. But, in some case if he ...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... about winning. But, in some case if he get failure by loosing his money he was und...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...el of game make risk to him and family. Still some luxurious people are playing gambl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, even so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88537549407 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48501893267 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7056805113 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788256581782 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324114390131 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327936709229 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047857502216 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238234956276 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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