Climate change and about the roles that government, corporations and individuals can play to improve it.
In the recent years, climate change has been one of the most alarming concerns. The researchers apprise that its consequence can be calamitous if the appropriate measures are not undertaken. In my opinion, government, corporations and individuals must work together in order to improve the situation.
The primary causes of a dreadful environment condition are the greenhouse gases emitted by humans, most of which are the results of the combustion of fossil fuels in cars, factories and electricity production. Other contributing factors are the methane released from agriculture and the gases used for refrigeration. Deforestation has also resulted in the crease in the levels of carbon dioxide and cars use by each individual household are also largely responsible for the increment of the change in global climate.
To address this rapidly growing issue, the use of efficient modes of transport that utilise low carbon fuel must be promoted, while at the same time the efforts must be directed towards restricting the number of vehicles on the road. Furthermore, the extensive use of renewable sources such as wind, solar and bioenergy is another beneficial method to resolve the problem. Thus, we as individuals should take persistent effort to efficiently consume energy resources, especially at home.
This dissertation has enumerated the seriousness of the issue and least actions taken by authorities to solve it. Therefore, if the governments fail to reduce the source that lead to the problem and we as individuals do to take full responsibility for the environment around us. It might then worsen the problem to an irreversible extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...uals do to take full responsibility for the environment around us. It might then worsen the problem to an...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37307692308 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10781368765 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6324483462 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160100714794 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535775114422 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648808513827 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10317333092 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113651335148 0.0609392437508 186% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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