As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?
Technology play cardinal role in our life we can not think our life without technology. Technology give a great revolution in the field of transport. Transporting good give us lot of facilitys .However, there are both pors and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay I will discuss some positives of the global trade and some challenges were overcome.
Let’s begin bt looking at some advantages of the world trade. One of the main advantages is that is provide verity to the costumers. For example some countries are popular for their fruit and other for the spices. Take India as an example, India produce large number of spices to the world. So with this facility people can have ample of options or and they can taste different type of food in home conditions.
Turning towords to the negative side of the topic, people can face problems due to the usage of packes food because most of the transported food is packed before the arrival. This can cause obesity and other health problems. Moreover, the cost of the item is increased when it come from another nations. So is more burden on the people when they buy a forgen product
To conclude, there are lot of the advantages of the global trade. We have to over weigh the pors of verity and the cons of the package product.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ty and the cons of the package product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63318777293 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4557563615 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4493437847 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7857142857 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128542421653 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407594688612 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341654992456 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718203605933 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247841015237 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 12.6369458128 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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