As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

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As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

Globalization has made a huge impact in today's commercialization. Many countries that do not have ways to grow their own food enter into trade with others. Albeit some people believe that the trade among countries has some hindrances, others think that trading is crucial for some countries' economy. I tend to agree that the benefits surely outweigh the drawbacks.

First of all, not every country is capable of surviving by itself. They have to barter goods among other countries due to meager goods from its side and, if they have shortages of other products they have the desideratum of exchanging products. Therefore, it is a win-win situation for both parts.

Moreover, it's still worth it even if products have to be transported over long distances, because some products can only be produced in one location. For example, Brazil offers great agricultural possibilities due to healthy soil and suitable weather. Europe may provide soil for agriculture, but the weather is more extreme and not suitable for producing all the crops needed.

Therefore, it is my belief that the benefits outdo the drawbacks and that global trade is both beneficial and necessary for most countries.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... think that trading is crucial for some countries economy. I tend to agree that the benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 193.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18134715026 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81949088426 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4323739039 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182200561746 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595064223315 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530669263198 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111756568694 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499679561548 0.0609392437508 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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