The importance of cars and aeroplane in modern life. Give examples.
In the past few decades, there has been an immense upsurge in the modes of transportation. Traveling by cars and airplanes have become the foremost choice of the people, because of the colossal benefits provided by them. This essay will elaborate on the importance of these in modern life and hence lead to a plausible conclusion.
Traveling by car has a myriad of advantages in our life. The most preponderant one is that it is the most convenient and reliable mode of transportation. It provides a feeling of comfort and more importantly privacy which remains a big issue in public transport. For example, an individual can travel at any time of the day in his car which is not possible on the bus or train. Moreover, it is convenient as one does not have to stop in between. Therefore, it is quite apparent that cars are an indispensable part of the modern world.
Further elaborating, it can be said that the airplane has made the world a small village. Not only has it made traveling to another part of the world easier but also in extremely less amount of time. Traveling to different regions has become affordable, due to which tourism is growing and so does the globalization. For instance, a businessman can attend a conference in a far place by traveling for a few hours, which was not possible in the past. Hence, the importance of the airplane is too dire to be ignored.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that cars and airplanes have become an integral part of our modern society and life without them is impossible to imagine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67870036101 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87716798872 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530685920578 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.514841562 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175292121958 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610134455699 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705810617387 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12172687706 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576557736874 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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