Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Parenting has remained a very responsible task for ages and has now become a debatable topic. Some people opine that parents should be held accountable for any act of their children. My opinion coincides with this given notion. This essay will elaborate on the viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
There is a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that children spent their majority of time with the guardian and hence learn the majority of things from them. Hence, it is the responsibility of parents to teach them about the rightful behavior. For example, if child abuse or fight with other children, his parents must stop him and guide towards the right path. Therefore, to make a child well disciplined, it is necessary to hold the parents legally responsible for any actions of their child.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that there is a great upsurge in the incidents of juvenile delinquency in recent years. Blaming parents for the crime committed by their peers is the most effective way to reduce these rates. Not only it will build pressure on guardians to take proper care of their child but also encourage them to teach lawful behavior. For instance, in many cases, the child starts stealing a small thing from his own house, but due to the negligence of parents, his psychology of stealing amplifies with time. Hence, any anti-social behavior of a child should be blamed for his or her parents.
In view of the arguments discussed above, it can be concluded that children learn by seeing and observing their parents actions. Therefore it will be justified if their parents held responsible for their acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8951048951 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63313411661 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0273915675 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369039020415 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121737664249 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120204996624 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252799969426 0.151781067708 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991057569791 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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