Q: What is the best invention of the last 100 years computer, antibiotics, and airplanes? Explain why?
In the last few decades, we have seen a tremendous upsurge in technology, in every sector of life. There have been numerous inventions in antibiotics, airplanes, which have changed the living standards of human beings. However, the most valuable of all in the last 100 years has been the innovation of computers. This essay will elaborate on the viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
There is a myriad of advantages that the computer has delivered to the world. The most preponderant one is that it has taken the field of medical research to the next level. Not only it has helped to find the cure for many deadly diseases but also increased the life expectancy of humans. For example, there are antidotes available for illnesses like tuberculosis, chicken pox and many more, which were considered fatal in the past. Therefore, it is needless to say that it is the greatest invention of the century and has become the indispensable part of our society.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that it has made the world a small village. The field of communication has undergone colossal of changes in the past century. Connecting to the people living in a different part of the world has become easier, with the help of mobile and internet. For instance, one can talk to the relative or attend a business conference anywhere, with the help of video calling. In addition, it has made space exploration possible, which was considered science fiction in the past. Nevertheless, it can be said that it is a medium that has helped to progress in various fields of life.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that the computer was the greatest discovery in human history that has changed life on the earth completely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86092715232 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82278504912 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6656396491 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.75 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0703329323314 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217728069074 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451447663998 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416875678136 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061332060948 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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