The importance of traveling for education is greatly overrated. In modern days, you can still be a brilliant scholar without going outdoors. To what extent do you agree?
The main reason of migrating for education purposes is widely popular among these days. Nowadays most intelligent students can be scholar in own country. Although it has many advantages and this advantages that involve.
First, of all in terms of going to a University is not always compulsory to go other places in order to gain some knowledge or to be more educated person. However some people believe that education outside the premises is more beneficial to their children. Especially if a parents that belong to well known families they prefer to study abroad. They think that all of the teachers in a foreign country is sophisticated and clever in terms of teaching skills towards their offspring.
But in recent studies shows that their is no need to travel in other part of the word to study in order to be a smart. Each countries are more on high technology and same teaching method they can prepare a lesson to their students. Like for example in Nursing students in the Philippines most of the books that they are using is same with American nursing school as well the authors of the books. This days you can use an internet to search what kind of research you need in just a few seconds you can access all the related article that you wanted. Most important is that if you are have a strong determination in your life to gain knowledge in your career .
Therefore, I conclude that their is no need to migrate to other city in terms of education purposes. Because it is costly and you need to adjust new environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vantages that involve. First, of all in terms of going to a University is no...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f all in terms of going to a University is not always compulsory to go other pla...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nowledge or to be more educated person. However some people believe that education outs...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...ficial to their children. Especially if a parents that belong to well known families they...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
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...g. But in recent studies shows that their is no need to travel in other part of t...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
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...chool as well the authors of the books. This days you can use an internet to search ...
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...nted. Most important is that if you are have a strong determination in your life to ...
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...ur life to gain knowledge in your career . Therefore, I conclude that their is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66789667897 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56454049909 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0917863907 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3571428571 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222380920238 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643622854395 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610732281472 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118952371574 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542385218179 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.