Information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and had some positive and negative effects on society as well as individuals lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree
The advancement in computer technology or information revolution has drastically replaced the traditional methods people used to communicate all over the world. Some people believe that advancement in information technology has very beneficial effects not only on the individual lives but also on society as a whole while others oppose this idea. This essay will discuss the reasons why information revolution has played both positive and negative role in society.
To begin with, the advancement in information technology is very advantageous for society. People now have an easy access to all type of information as it is available just a click away. The invention of internet, for example, made it possible for people to get knowledge on any required topic without anyone else help. Furthermore, getting information fast saves a lot of time. For instance, government now can do a survey online in few hours rather than days. Moreover, people can communicate with others easily even when they are far away from each other.
On the other hand, such easy access to information can be detrimental to society if used by wrong persons such as terrorists or goons, which in turn make the information advancement harmful for society. In addition to this, various types of posts on social media platforms such as face book or twitter can also create disturbance in society.
To conclude, this essay discussed the ways information revolution acts as both beneficial and harmful element in society. Despite some disadvantages, in my opinion, advancement in information technology not only changed the life of individuals but also affected whole society positively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...vantageous for society. People now have an easy access to all type of information as it is ava...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
... To conclude, this essay discussed the ways information revolution acts as both ben...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.75862068966 417% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36882129278 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98923163876 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0780754664 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180554663864 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664179984506 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509537812802 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122685776788 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710570355316 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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