It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is the most crucial desicion of every individuals life. People generally held the view that it is an absurd desicion to marry before achieving a job or completing the academics. This essay will discuss the reasons why is in fact doing the marriage at an early age without any settlement in both employment and academics is harmful for an individual.
To begin with, early marriage is just a madness because of many reasons. Firstly, individuals become burden on others if they get married before achieving any job because they are not finacilly independent. which in turn not only cause problems to them but also to others on whom they depend for their livelihood.
Furthermore, marriage at such an early age is a big foolishness. Individuals are not mature enough to handle the responsibilities of a family. because with experience of different life circumstances they can learn to handle adverse situations in life. As a result, they become victim of stress related illnesses. A recent study, for instance, has shown that significant number of people have been suffering from depression because they got married at a very young age and could not cope with the burdens of married life.
To conclude, people should take a great care while taking decision about marriage. In my opinion,getting married without any job or completing the study is very wrong decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...use they are not finacilly independent. which in turn not only cause problems to them...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...andle the responsibilities of a family. because with experience of different life circu...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...andle the responsibilities of a family. because with experience of different life circu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , getting
...g decision about marriage. In my opinion,getting married without any job or completing t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07929515419 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90271267007 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7328290025 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6923076923 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141098032097 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501247884202 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830656700302 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960653270239 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511362580595 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.