Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree.
Various types of traditional arts and music have long been a part of our life even from the ancient time. people generally held the view that there ought to be a reduction in the amount of money invested by government in arts, music and painting. this essay will discuss the reasons why in fact spending money in different art fields is beneficial.
To begin with, government must not cut the expenses on arts and music. Because they preserve our traditions and culture for future generations. A recent study, for example, has shown that a significant number of people around the world obtain the knowledge of their ansestors, rituals, and customs through classic songs. As a result, there is no reason to deny that artistic fields helps our culture to remain alive, so government must not decrease the proportion of invesment in it.
Furthermore, painting has also very important role in our life. it helps a person to express his ideas in multiple ways and also provides soothing feeling to the audience. The paintings, for instance, of Pablo Piccaso are still very popular and give relief to the viewers. As a matter of fact, there should be more investment in this field to encourage people to join it.
To conclude, the role that painting, music and arts play in our life is undeniable. In my opinion, there is no need to lessen the amount of money in artistic fields rather it should be increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8024691358 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57211193238 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.012459545 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7692307692 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181417715326 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060515825238 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754090140466 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105040647332 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042516534354 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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