It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of getting married and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that marriage prior to job stability or completion of the academic path is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that marrying late can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, marrying at an early age can provide noticeable effects to society which are rooted in the fact that spending more time with one’s beloved partner, as well as counting on the partner’s help are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that girls have numerous restrictions on personal freedom in their own families. Thus, beneficial ramifications of early marriage and starting a family apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of marriage, getting married before 30’s might increase the consequences of quitting higher education due to taking on too much responsibility. Moreover, fundamental aspects of leaving academic education relate to this reality that the demerits of increasing the chances of divorce pertain to youngsters’ maturity levels. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of marrying early in India is correlated negatively with the rapid increase in the birth rate. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of population statistics.
To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of marrying late far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only the advantages of taking responsibility, prove the significance of growing to maturity, but also pinpoint life durability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62199312715 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29054264615 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656357388316 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1501898017 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946475096826 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327159150177 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439683084374 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05293535824 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356830195676 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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