It is argued that getting married before Finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is an essential part of our life. Nowadays, people perform marriage, once the financial stability is achieved in their life. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether it is good option to get married before finishing school. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
In this modern era, everyone want best job, according to their education, so that can live happily. The education is the primary need to get the job. Moreover, it is truth that getting work means money in your pocket. For instance, according to study done in University of Texas, higher the degree attained by a person higher the chances of employment and higher will be the income. Therefore, people who cannot complete their high school degree are more likely to face difficulties in searching job which will have adverse effect on their income.
Similarly, there is an age of attempting the goals in life. Usually, we cannot say a person should get married in that ages which is actually beneficial and should be allocated for education. For example, a survey done in early 21st century revealed that the number of people who get married early did not achieved their doctoral degree. Hence, it is significant that young people should concentrate of their education before putting themselves in marriage and its outcomes.
To recapitulate marriage before completing education and financially stable is not a good option. The essay discussed the deleterious and detrimental effects of getting marriage before education and respectable job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'achieve'
Suggestion: achieve
...of people who get married early did not achieved their doctoral degree. Hence, it is sig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13565891473 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6683252684 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9902911574 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211294320284 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758955074661 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848694160598 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134325403328 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254618374043 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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