Whether marriage should be postponed until completing the study and finding a good job has sparked an ongoing controversy. While some believe it is better to be delayed, others maintain that marriage should be prioritized to studying and working. This essay will discuss why it is more likely to have a successful marriage after finishing college and securing a good job.
On the one hand, getting married before having a tertiary education and finding a well-paid job pose a real risk to marriage. This is because couples find it difficult to financially support their family leading to bitter discussions over household expenditures which, in turn, negatively affects their relationships as well as children's bringing up and education. Numerous studies have suggested that couples who enter into marriage without higher educations and good jobs face terribly more problems which will finally contribute to early divorcing.
In addition, people tend to behave more maturely and gain practical wisdom by continuing their studies and working. Therefore, they make more rational decisions when it comes to selecting their life partners and managing family problems smoothly and effectively. Also, statistics have indicated that the individuals who get married after completing college and finding a good job, experience a happier marriage than others which endures for years to come.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is more sensible to marry after acquiring enough knowledge and work experience to ensure a successful marriage.
- Parents are responsible for the behaviour of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree 55
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree? 80
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree? 88
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree? 77
- Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples. 88
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...rience to ensure a successful marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53164556962 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82474876965 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.484282506 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842430163693 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367093994622 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288680413716 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507308717331 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100678644192 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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