What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of modern technology which is effective and efficient and easily available in city areas. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that urban areas have big scope and opportunity for future which can help to build up the career. In fact, not only there are latest technology and system but also well education facilities. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in a good stead as far as advancing is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this arguments is that there are various hinderance and obstacle in a rural area that doesn't provide a platform to sharpen the skills of the public. Besides, there are not enough programs which show that participation is less. Financial planning for the rural area should focus on the development of the future in order to solve the issue based on rural sector. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of a side that helps to provide the platform.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that benefits of big cities are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: are the latest
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'obstacles'?
Suggestion: obstacles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, well, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70305676856 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60842382115 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2901445027 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171511741178 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518780485152 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694107145852 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089941467857 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581755686901 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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