Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this ? Discuss with appropriate examples?
The most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the myriad of large shopping mall. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a number of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that large shopping malls help to uplift the economy of the country as well as family. In fact, Not only do people have easy access to all accessories but it also provides opportunity in employment sector. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in a good stead as far as convenient is concerned.
Another pivotal aspects of this argument is that it provides facilities to people which they can utilise and since extreme mall have all kinds of things so consumer don't have to go other place which save time and money. Besides, large shopping complex have huge area so that people can send their spare time. For example, it by providing all sort of facilities help in augmenting the sales and generating profit and meet win-win situation as well as satisfy consumer. Hence, it is apparent why many a re in favour of large shopping malls.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of large shopping malls are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ll have all kinds of things so consumer dont have to go other place which save time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, well, for example, in fact, sort of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71861471861 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5492359344 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3699212261 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160736150265 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653949185321 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469558531387 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10794619593 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408711306399 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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