One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is bringing a positive change in human behaviour by implementing stringent rules and regulations. There is a widespread concern personal behave will hardly change by laws. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that with strict policies and financial penalties in place creates a sense of fear to those people who attempt criminal activities. Not only do people have a sense of fear of resulting negative behavior but the number of crime rates also bound to decline. Similarly, We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that countries with tough laws has little number of crime. Needless to say all these benefits stand people in good stead.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that a number of laws that human mind unconsciously follows. For example, there are a number of researches by various governmental bodies that show that in many occasions drivers automatically stops in red light signal on the road. As per my experience of driving, I have stopped many times in red traffic signal unknowingly when approach near to an intersection. Hence, it is apparent why many people believe that laws can change human behaviour.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of laws are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of laws are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, similarly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04098360656 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84997300751 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610655737705 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7192519624 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30019486962 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107712733068 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152359081417 0.071462118173 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166652728425 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779918998063 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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