One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to a colossal upsurge in the number of tourists around the world. There is a widespread worry that increased numbers will lead to a myriad of problems in any country. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trends, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that the growing number of tourists helps to the development of the economy of countries. In fact, not only do countries generate income from travel and tourism such as hotel, transport and entertainment, but the citizens of countries are also augmenting their knowledge. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that there is a positive correlation between influx of tourists and growth of countries' economy. Needless to say, all these merits stand any country in good stead, as far as positive factors are concerned.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of tourism. The primary one stems from the fact that thanks to illicit activities of foreigners, tourism can have detrimental effect on the people of developing countries. In other words, people from poor countries try to imitate culture, language and lifestyle of tourists as they think that is a right things to do. For example, there are a number of studies by various governmental bodies that show that people living in tourism places are more likely to fall prey into a vicious circle of illegal activities such as brawl, drugs and robbery. Hence, it is apparent why some people are avoiding promotion of tourism.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks the benefit of the development of tourism indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
..., there are both merits and demerits to this trends, although I am of the opinion th...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... tourists as they think that is a right things to do. For example, there are a number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 312.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93269230769 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6741124324 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8337085566 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149349493107 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534805432523 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491511098484 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878642107093 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553764313868 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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