life expectancy
In the contemporary era, with medical advancements, people can enjoy a happy and healthy life. Most of people think that it is a positive development as people can enjoy their lives with their loved ones. However, this phenomenon has myriad demerits to mankind as well as environment.
To commence with, with longevity in life, child can spend more years with their grandparents, and get more knowledge from their experiences in the future. Secondly, authorities get advantage from it as experienced person in multifarious sectors could provide better insight as compare to the young generation, which would beneficial for both the company as well as the country’s economy. Most importantly, advance medical care makes every malady treatment within the bounds.
On the other side, this trend has a plethora of cons to mankind and ambiance as well. First and foremost, this trend mushroom the old population, which would further create numerous issues such as unemployment among juveniles, pollution, and traffic congestion. Secondly, old people get prone to ailment easily, so, their checkup and treatment expenses are shooting up significantly, consequently, it would enhance the financial burden on families. Finally, the natural resources are vulnerable because this policy will incline the utilization of it.
To recapitulate, this trend has huge benefits to mankind as they spend a quality life with their family; however, there is no dearth of its demerits either. Therefore, each and every person ought to be made affords to shun its demerits to enjoy a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ple can enjoy a happy and healthy life. Most of people think that it is a positive development...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...h would beneficial for both the company as well as the country's economy. Most import...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39112903226 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9189733087 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0701888446 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869482191814 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342767598878 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497110507238 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612976277272 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485388361443 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.