Medical technology can increase life expectancy. Is it a blessing or curse?
One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the number of increasing expectation through medical field. There is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is the increasing of life expectation through medical technology can not only contribute to increase expectation. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by medical technology, not only one can benefit more when its come to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and standard of life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proportion is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follow such a system, can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of medical technology.
In view of the arguments outline above, one can conclude that, the benefits of medical technology are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99122807018 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90471433074 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1082144746 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.454545455 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272556532226 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104654886528 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128663381804 0.071462118173 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162567858053 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092451999368 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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