Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
The region will become popular when it gives a successful person to the world. After success, the regions become well-known and importance increase due to the connection of a successful person. As it also gives some bad experience at the beginning of a journey for success.
The developed region have all the facilities like education, sports, medical and other which gives opportunities to people for growth. Government always in the vision to develop the region, so they take good plan for the benefit of people. A successful person also gives an identity to the region all over the world. It creates opportunities for other people of the region to grow and achieve goals in life.
Sometimes people become successful without the support of the region. Many sports person face this issue in India. They don't get the support from the people around them, due to personal issues or lack of understanding and lower education level. This happens in some very rural area where education ration is equaled to none, so people have a narrow mind with low vision. For instance, Marry Com - Boxer of India wants to be a boxer, but the region where she lives it doesn't have facilities for sports, so she faces many problems in the way of success.
The success of the person depending on each other, person and region. Developed region generates more opportunities in compare to the non-developed region to produce successful persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99568965517 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56516679367 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0361582982 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7857142857 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361491555314 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158098310932 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992520757159 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260234676199 0.151781067708 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754286395663 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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