Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Whether or not region influences a person success is becoming a popular topic among many demographics, and its controversial impacts have spared a heated debate. While some people think that success depends on regions, others maintain that region has no impact on a person accomplishment. To talk about these factors separately.
To begin with, developed countries people have the chance to gain prosperity in a very short period of time, because these countries have advance facilities and state of the art education system. These people also have the freedom to learn whatever they want, which will help them to be successful within their area of interest. For example, USA is a very rich country, which allows its citizens to grow their startup companies easily. From this example, it can be seen clearly that developed countries people have an easy route to gain wealth than under developing countries people.
On the other hand, easy route does not always lead to optimistic outcomes, because there are various factors that contribute to a person success. There are many people from the poor countries, who were able to outcome all the difficulties in their life to become a successful person. As a tangible example, a scientific research conducted by a prestigious university has asserted that many people from poor countries have taken a reputable post in multifarious companies including Google and Apple. Therefore, we can say that determination and hardworking can also lead to bright future.
In a nutshell, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that a person needs to do hard work, and must be determined to achieve goals. Native regions do not impact person ability to gain success, and to become a prominent figure for future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whether
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...ance to gain prosperity in a very short period of time, because these countries have advance f...
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Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...e countries have advance facilities and state of the art education system. These people also hav...
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Suggestion:
...than under developing countries people. On the other hand, easy route does not a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18900343643 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7962966026 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7131586217 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240294362885 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888774445467 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899701667514 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164617797655 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107287685802 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.