Extreme sports like skiing, water etc. are dangerous and should these be banned?
Recently, there has been increased participation in extreme sports worldwide. These phenomena have garnished mixed views from experts from society. There is an ongoing debate on the positive and negative effects of such a sporting activity. Proponents are of the view that such sports need to be promoted as it instills risk-taking abilities in the person taking part. However, others have opposite view stating that they are risky and should be banned. In this article, I will lay my opinion after analyzing both sides.
To begin with, there are numerous advantages of extreme sports like skiing, river rafting, and water sports. First, it increases the risk-taking ability and makes a person brave. By taking an active part in such sporting events members get equipped with a fearless mindset, which can be boon in their professional and personal life. For example, by taking part in hiking trips during my school days, not only I was able to eradicate my fear of the heights but also developed a useful skill of taking risks and coming out of comfort zone. Hence, I have a successful career and personal life.
On the other hand, there are several detrimental impacts of such sports, if not performed with adequate safety measures, it can sometimes become life threating and dangerous. Many a time it can be fatal and deadly. For instance, recent news of equipment malfunction in one such event cost the life of a participant. Moreover, not all section of the society is able to take part, as extreme sports are expensive.
In conclusion, for the above examples, it is evident that extreme sports like skiing and water can be boon for the participants in terms of health and positive mindsets, however, if not performed with utter care it can be ban.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95608108108 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61937203218 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8014781398 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237206301568 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733175305704 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819567344242 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147110901636 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596619632123 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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