Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
Many people argue that region plays crucial role behind the success of a person while other people think that if a person has determination then he can get success irespective of regional background. As per my opinion, I think that if the person has will and dedication then person do not require support of regional background for the success.
Firstly, people who come from sophesticated background can also fail to get success because there are many factors which play vital role to achieve our goal. If we do not have will, determination and courage then we can not do anything even if we have strong regional backgroud or support. For instance, even though some communities in Hariyana state are popular in sports because of their region, out of them only quite a few people achieved success at international level.
Secondly, sometimes regional background puts indirect pressure on us to perform well to achive our goals as we are being compared with other successful people having the same regional background. Hence, instead of insperation, many times we feel depression and can not work freely towards our milestones. For instance, State of Maharastra has produced many well known international cricketers and now if any new cricketer starts his career, people compare him with other successful state crickets.
In conclusion, even though region teaches many skills to individual, person can achieve these skills using strong will, determination and hardwork.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26271186441 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8144653432 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.3551000454 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306525069541 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132516153206 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974766895276 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189864392492 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113234868457 0.0609392437508 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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