Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?

Many people believe that to become a successful person, region play a crucial role form where they belong to. While other think that success is the synonym of person’s willingness, determination and hard work that they put for a particular goal. In my opinion, achieving success is the chiefly depend on person’s will and dedication, rather than, the regional background they come from.

There are factors which play important role in success. Most important is efforts or hard work for a particular aim. Secondly, a willingness which provides positive energy throughout the struggle rather than the place from they belong. For instance, take M.S. Dhoni or Amitabh Bachhan, they both belong to rural areas and they both had lack of facilities and opportunities in their earlier career but they did hard work and achieved top levels in their respective fields.

On the flip side, the region also influences the way they define success. Because some time atmosphere where people grew up not only determine the possibilities of success but also, it makes people’s will stronger to endeavour. Furthermore, People get the basic skill to accomplish a certain goal from native’s background which influenced by family, friend, political and social environment.

To conclude, although region provides the basic skill to strive for success, willingness and hard work are more important to convert these strive into success which are rightly explained in the famous quote, “Hard work is the key to success”.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40833333333 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91161467231 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9345162048 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334802428114 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126941173806 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957374829624 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210637656065 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153782814586 0.0609392437508 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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