Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
In the informational era, the advancements of successful people's achievements depend on the regions they belong and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although many people contest that the region plays an indispensable role behind the success of famous people, others disagree with this proposition. This essay will discuss that a person's will play an important in its success not the region.
Firstly, successful people have shared their experiences with the world that how they achieved success and almost all told the same formula that there are no shortcuts. Moreover, they talked about keystone habits that lead them to achieve the triumph in the life. As a tangible example, Daren Hardy, who is the author of the famous book "Compound Effects" clearly mentioned that consistency towards your goal will lead to the success and will achieve by putting small efforts on daily basis against your comfort zone. Manifestly, if you read the biography of famous people you will find one thing common, which is to work constantly in achieving big in the life.
Secondly, almost all the successful people in the world have keystone habits and they are bound of doing certain routines on daily basis. They always try to stretch their comfort zone by challenging their fears and using full potential of their will power. To cite a practical instance, the author of "success principles" clearly mention in his book that circumstances change but the mind-set develop is actually lead an individual to achieve big in the life. Evidently, successful people achieved brilliance in their life by hard work.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that success is the combination of mostly controlling the will power. Therefore, I staunchly opine that successful people master their mind and will power to become successful in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...oposition. This essay will discuss that a persons will play an important in its success n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31756756757 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85188767852 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3473144369 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262503891499 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104494788325 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375513744341 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172989850867 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329871955069 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.