Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
In the informational era, it has seen in the sports matches that rival supporters create violence and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although many people contest sports is promoting antisocial behavior, others disagree with this proposition. This essay will discuss that team sports are promoting healthy activities and passion for maintaining a strong body.
Firstly, people love the players of their love teams and try to play in a similar way as their favorite player is playing. Furthermore, people discuss about their team and fitness of the players among the peers that creates enthusiasm in people to play the game, which will help them in physical fitness. As a tangible example, my friend was quite fat and he was unable to reduce weight but he became the fan of the famous player "Messi" and started playing football. In a few months he was dramatically changed and lost 10 kg. Manifestly, sports are inspiring people to involve themselves in physical activities that has enormous benefits.
Secondly, national sport is creating socialism in the country because people gather in a place to watch the match of their favorite team. To cite a practical example, when Germany and England play football match, you will see people gather in various places and all family members sit in front of the television to watch the match. Evidently, sport is creating socialism in a country.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that team sports have enormous benefits because it creates many positive feelings in the people as compared to the negative ones. Therefore, I staunchly opine that we should promote team sports so that strong connections will build in a society.team sports should be promoted so that strong connections build in a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85401459449 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1023818891 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23328063154 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913228515445 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631626546347 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157999717906 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780988694041 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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