Medical technology is responsible for the human's life expectancy, to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Medical technology is responsible for the human's life expectancy, to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Human's life longevity has been changed since the emerge of medical technology. Some people think that technology interferes the natual process of human life, while others maintain that human life span will be advanced by medical tech. This essay will discuss why technology will eventually play a main role in enhancing human life.

At some point in the future, technology will takes full responsibility on human life and expands the lifetime on every human on Earth. There are numerous research on advanced medicine have been conducted over the last few years and they are proven to be successful. Japan for example has an oldest population in the world and thanks to their advanced research labs mankind is now able to cure many diaseases. As the result of these experiments, there is no reason why human can't be benefited from these elixir medicines.

Despite the tremendous profits of medical technology, some people don't think that technology will be able to replace a doctor. Futhermore, the disruption of medical tech will affect the natual process of human life. Though these people are unaware of the fast changing world of the modern healthcare which helps doctors to release a lot of pressure and mistakes. It is a matter of time that technology will be fully responsible for the human's life expectancy.

In conclusion, the responsibility of medical tech is important for human's life span. In my opinion, it is only a matter of time that mandkind's natural death will be reduced and a prolong life will become true.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s life longevity has been changed since the emerge of medical technology. Some people thin...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...me point in the future, technology will takes full responsibility on human life and e...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...to be successful. Japan for example has an oldest population in the world and than...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...periments, there is no reason why human cant be benefited from these elixir medicine...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...fits of medical technology, some people dont think that technology will be able to r...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ology will be fully responsible for the humans life expectancy. In conclusion, the ...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...kinds natural death will be reduced and a prolong life will become true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.657440788 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5853181761 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269550773564 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122942781815 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102769810721 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187797344696 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414563343629 0.0609392437508 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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