]Modern technology is now very common in most work places.
How do you think this has changed the way we work?
Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
These days, modern technology is used widely in most companies. Some people believe that using these modern technologies has many adavantages on our jobs, while others argue that depending on the modern technology in performing all our activities could have a negaitve impact on our lifestyle. This essay will discuss the how using the modern technology has changed our lives and how it affects on our lives negatively.
Using the modern technologies has changed our live in performing our jobs more faster than before. Nowadays, using computer has helped people in performing their jobs in less time. For example, before 30 years, the design of three stroy building was taking aroud 2 months, but nowadays, using the computer has enabled us finishing the design only within 2 hours. Therefore, using the modern technology has changed our work by performing the job in less time.
On the other hand, using the modern technology has some disadvantages. People have become more lazy in doing their jobs. For example, using computers has led people do not perform any simple mathematical calculations. Thus, it seems clear that using the modern technologies has negative impacts on people behaviours.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how using moden technologies has changes our lives through enabling us to perform our jobs faster, but also it makes people more lazy. In my opinion, using modern technology has helped people to achieve goals.
- A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ 75
- Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs. Some people believe that eventually all work will be done by robots while others believes that there will be a limit to the tasks that robots can perform. 77
- A recent study has shown that over 50% of school children cannot write legibly. The researchers concluded that the widespread use of smartphones, tablets and computers by children from as young as 12 months old was to blame. We are now living in a “post 65
- With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago What problems does this cause for society and the family 66
- some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors. 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
... our lifestyle. This essay will discuss the how using the modern technology has changed...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...changed our live in performing our jobs more faster than before. Nowadays, using computer h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27467811159 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67213485172 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523605150215 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6897980002 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177037181758 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896681031959 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509407935511 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12798527023 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025859861212 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.