Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on imposing laws on alcohols. While some people argue that stores should sell alcohols to the people without any regulation, on my point of view there should be a set of rules in controlling the sale of alcohols. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my argument while analyzing both the advantages and the disadvantages.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages in imposing rules on sale of liquor. For example, if there are regulation on the maximum quantity to be sold, there will be less affect on th society. If government impose laws on the price level on alcohols that will also help to discorage alcohol consumption. Apart from that the stores must take a valid licence in selling liquor because there can be stores who sell low quality liquor to general public.Therefore a legal enforcement is essential in alcohol sale.
On the other hand, some people do not see any importance in imposing regulations on alcohol because they think that alcoholic beverages are part of human life from the ancient times. For instance, if there are no laws people might drink unlimitedly making lot of health issues in the country while expanding the expenditure on health. However, there should be a law governing the sale of alcohol for the protection of individuals and the society as well.
In conclusion, it is recommended the governments to impose rules on alcols at the same time they can increase revenue through taxation. It is also beleived, that alcohols are not favourable for health, therefore governments should discorage alcohol sales in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04744525547 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84835485259 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5866508992 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30079246496 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104570957893 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102203356999 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175134962685 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879266294065 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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