It is true that family plays an impotant role in development of a child. But nowaday, Not only father but also mother works full time, therefore, parents and their children seem to be less close. This essay will the causes as well as the problem related to this.
There are several reasons why children spend less time With their parents. One of the primary reasons is that pearents spend less time with their offspring. After spending almost nine hours on screens in the office, parents feel tired and unable to keep a check on a child. Another contribute factor to mention is the chance of the rules of the women in children' s life. Women traiditionally stayed at home to cook , clean and look after their children, but nowaday, they often go out to work full time to support the family financially. As a rusult, their offspring may be left alone, or with nanier or babysitters. For example, today, because of busy work, many families don't eat meal together every night, even all day.
in addition, tHe lack of closeness in families can have negative effect on children. First of all, the children ends up showing less interest towards studies and get inclined more towards games, which is not a good sign for development of a child. Secondly, when be left behind, children feel lonely at a certain time and seek support from the outer world which can put the child in wrong paths. In some case, some of them join gangs, so juvenile deliquency is on the increase. According to the new searches, the maximun number of criminals are almost teenagers and children that are lack of caring of parents.
Inconclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for closeness between parents and children and a variety of negative effect. In my opinion, parents should collaborate together to help children to have a better future.
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 77
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 78
- Modern technology is now very common in many work places.How do you think this has changed the way we worked?Do you think there are disadvantages to reply too much on technology? 11
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 77
- In many countries it is common for families to own and run their own business Some people think this is the best way to run a business while others consider this a potential source of problem What is your opinion 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 317.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76971608833 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47491269191 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4095615002 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9411764706 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381316558115 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114062888549 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921695235674 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214928566953 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073162024185 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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