Being a parent comes up with various responsibilities towards children. However, there is a noticeable difference that can be seen between part of mother and father in the majority of communities. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this distinction and role of parents in the future.
To embark upon, there are many causes behind the differences between duties of mother and father. The prominent one is high illiteracy among people of rural and remote areas. In Eastern societies, men are considered to be the head of family. They merely take care of the finances while women ought to take care of their offspring. From nourishing to educating, every task is granted to females resulting in their intensive contribution for child's growth. In addition to this, lack of confidence among women do not let them come out of domestic zone. Thereby, the get entangled with the burden of child's development on their shoulders. They have to look after every requirement of the young ones. This implicit their exposure to other sectors of world.
Probing ahead, by the burgeoning awareness regarding maintaining family, people will generate various ideas to raise their offspring. The main part will be to create a friendly environment for the child as it is necessary to build a healthy life for them. To make it more clear, parents ought to quit their bad habits like smoking and avoid use of offensive language. Apart from this, providing them good education will also be an imperative duty of birth givers. Since education is a fundamental part of their lives, they have to pay extra attention to it. Collective efforts by mother and father will flourish the life of their young ones.
To recapitulate, there are a number of core reasons for the gender differences in parental roles but the future is projected to hold similarities among them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, apart from, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 31.9359605911 188% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99677419355 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73475530468 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9017962136 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5263157895 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210293242181 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614550863149 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768970097171 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152238106792 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708415033244 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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