As well as making money business also have social responsibility to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether individuals follow some liabilities towards the social issue along with the making money or not has become sophisticated issue, nowadays. While, I accept that the top priority of company is to generate profits, they should have social duties as well.
The prominent factor why I deem that business already contribute to society by merely focusing on making money is , when companies earn a good profit , they can extend their business which creates a lot of job opportunities for the masses. some big multinational corporations such as p;Apple or Microsoft can bea great illustration because they have been employing hundreds of thousands of individuals around the world and which aid to reduce the unemployment rate
in nation .Besides this ,when Industries make higher profits , they will pay more tax to the government .Consequentlyp, this money can be utilised in the other sector like education or health which will benefit society as a whole.
Nevertheless I would argue that apart from making money companies also required to have duties. firstly ,since their rising environment damage companies needs to take instant actions in order to preserve natural environment. For instance ,they could try exclusive technology to recycle their waste instead of disposing of them right away. Secondly, Corporation should also consider helping those who are left foot fortunate such as homeless or disable citizens that I will we know it will be not only contribute to a better society but also exist to enhance the image of company or brand.
To recapitulate, even though the business must consider primary ambition of the company is profit ,but ignore the Social responsibility is not appropriate protocol for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4197080292 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0479321504 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664233576642 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.924216319 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184537335407 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816372033803 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577139643077 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101874245655 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397223327266 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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