The newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society. What is your opinion?

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The newspaper is no longer a need in the modern society. What is your opinion?

Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals newspaper has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it has need in modern society or not. I will elaborate this notion in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, technology has gifted us plenty of things which has changed our life. One of them is mobile phone which has become integral part of our toady’s life. As a case in point, due to hectic schedule majority of people prefer to read news from their cell phone because they don’t want to carry newspaper with them. Moving ahead, these days news spread very sharply due to electronic media in short period of time.
On the contrary, every rose has its thorns so there are some pitfalls of it. Firstly, cell phone creates a lot of ailments while using it long time. To cite an example, one of major problems stress and bad effect on eyes which a lot of troubles in future time. Lastly, masses have some other bad habits while reading news which distract their interest.
To conclude, newspapers are good source of getting knowledge from all around the world. According to my perspective, individuals should prefer newspaper as compared electronic media.

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Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ewspaper with them. Moving ahead, these days news spread very sharply due to electro...
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Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...harply due to electronic media in short period of time. On the contrary, every rose has its t...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'times'?
Suggestion: times
...s a lot of ailments while using it long time. To cite an example, one of major probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, so, while, in short, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51340047073 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1420454414 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1428571429 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805343569887 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025515876563 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03295889442 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051062434688 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430613399829 0.0609392437508 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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