Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspect of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? What kind of people would find it hard to achieve?
For most of the people it is hard to balance their life in work and other life such as friends, family, etc. Many people have trouble with creating this balance which is necessary to live a peaceful and satisfied life. In this essay, we will discuss the importance of this balance and what kind of people find it hard to achieve.
To discuss it first we should investigate this work-life balance. It is a well known belief that human life is not just about work. There is also another part of his/her life which includes himself/herself, family, friends. When people can not create this work-life balance it could be a very destructive thing in life because as humans in this globalized world we should work and earn money. However, people also need to relax and clear his/her mind with others in life. Many researchers point out that for a good and productive work or study time it is important to relax the mind and clear the brain with other activities such as family time or having a drink with a friend.
Sadly even if they try some people can not reach this balance. There are people who spend all of their time working or with anything except work. They are both dangerous and unsustainable to do. When one needs to earn so much money or tries to achieve a position at work he/she should work most of the time. On the other hand when one is too lazy to work or has other goals in life it is a high possibility to not work when it is necessary.
In conclusion, life is all about balance. To reach a pleased life in every way, this balance must be created.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46180555556 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3568972815 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5117171348 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3125 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359169478539 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123743780275 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711051773491 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229396513869 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889103382763 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 12.6369458128 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.5310837438 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.32886699507 79% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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