'Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. '
Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
It has become quite common for young people to leave home either for study or work purposes. This affords numerous advantages for those who do this but it is not without its difficulties either.
Living independently at a young age gives young people many opportunities to learn. For example learning how to budget money. manage time. complete paperwork or forms. work or live with new people and in some cases learn how to cook and look after a home (point I advantage). Without having parental guidance on every Single issue or problem encountered young people can also learn about how to solve problems and make decisions independently.
However, living away from home is not without its drawbacks. For one thing youngsters may feel isolated, lonely and homesick living in a new place without their family for the first time. They may not be sufficiently mature to adapt and could fan into debt through not managing their money, or fail to keep up with their studies, or be late or absent from work due to lack of time management skills. In the worst scenario. without parental guidance, they may become friendly with. or influenced by, unsuitable people and get involved in criminal activities.
On the whole, however, I still believe it is a positive development for most young people to have independence at an early age. as long as they are made aware of the possible problems of living away from home. They should also be given advice prior to leaving home and continuing support, albeit from a distance. once they have left home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, for example, for one thing, in some cases, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8783269962 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57114640827 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8926490605 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4705882353 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285649884938 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845992765559 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814704839649 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187208821795 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744950371463 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.