'Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real
change can only be achieved at government level.'
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your
point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be achieved at government level. While it is possible to claim that the government should prepare several laws to prevent environmental problems like the pollution, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why individual attitudes can't make big change in environmental issues. First of them that if people have not a great responsibility towards their environment, they won't participate in any change role. It can also be argued that the personal role is lower effect than government role. It should also be taken into account that the responsibility of environment falls on all people on country.
Those who argue for government role in environmental problems have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that government can put fees to make discipline towards the environment. Then, there are concerns about education ministry teaches students how to deal with the environment problems, this increases the maturity of students about their environment.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal point of view is that the great changes will happen by government. I would strongly recommend that the government should put high priority towards environmental problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...everal reasons why individual attitudes cant make big change in environmental issues...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24796747967 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98998316701 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3190912454 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260270171474 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921214540895 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787054752124 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154917681556 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801118094374 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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