Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.
To what extent do you agree? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experiences.
Most people leave home at an early age to pursue their educational and professional careers. Some people consider departing from loved one’s at an early age for attainment personal goals as beneficial, while others maintain this act as non-beneficial. This essay will discuss the positive aspects of leaving home at a young age to study and work.
Firstly, education has no boundaries. Therefore, people from small towns tend to flourish their careers in respective fields of interest by moving to cities with more opportunities. As an example, students in pursuit of better and quality knowledge move to bigger cities with renowned universities which equips them with better degrees and assists in attaining better jobs. As a result, to follow and develop a better career people elect to move to various universities located far from their homes.
On the other hand, employment sector has become over crowded. Therefore, people residing in small towns and cities do not have access to ample of job opportunities available in bigger cities. Hence, to seek better employment and quality of living a number of people migrate from their home towns and depart from their loved ones.
An exponential increase is observed in young people to leave their homes to pursue good careers. In my opinion, owing to greater educational and job opportunities offered by bigger cities individual’s should leave their home to follow a better future.
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- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples? 77
- Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. 77
- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples? 77
- What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day. 72
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29004329004 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85648031148 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5670995671 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5508682507 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205866686771 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840723140365 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679240470692 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131054326407 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727807356636 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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