Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become an eesential part of our lives, what
is your opinion?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, following the mass media which includes TV, radio and newspaper has become more common. Some people believe that following media affects our lives significantly, while others argue that media does not present an essential part of our lives. This essay will discuss the reasons why mass media has become an essential part of our lives.
Media has become an essential part of our lives because it delivers the news to us with evidences. Most media resources support their news with images and videos which convince people about their news. For example, in Middle East, Al-Arabia channel provides a lot of pictures and videos about the killing in Iraq which affect people responses. Therefore, it seems clear that media plays a significant role in our lives, and affect on people thoughts.
On the other hand, some people think that media is not essential in their lives. They support their opinions by saying that media does not provide accurate news, and it manipulates the evidences. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that 84% of American people do not believe the news which are provided by media. These people are unaware of the fact that there are not another ways to capture the news rather than the media. Thus, media affects our lives significantly and it plays a significant role in our lives.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why the media is very essential in our lives. In my opinion, I believe that media is essential because it is only the resource which provides the news with evidences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ys a significant role in our lives, and affect on people thoughts. On the other hand, ...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which provides the news with evidences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95471698113 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40082458838 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479245283019 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.5122176961 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290942476737 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123946278367 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915958450811 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206140686325 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120440621049 0.0609392437508 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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