Illiterate parents cannot teach their children well, a laborer’s child cannot become a doctor, what are your views regarding this.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, people have started to affect strongly on choosing the future careers of their kids. Some people believe that children of illiterate people will not achieve higher educational degrees because their parents are illiterate, while others argue that there is no relationship between the literature of the parents and the advancements of children in their academic lives. This essay will discuss the influence of literature parents on their children and how the son of a doctor become a doctor.
The environment inside the house affect strongly on the achievements of children. Children are influenced by their parents jobs and they look forward to become like them in the future. Recent study, which was conducted at the Cambridge university, has shown that 95% of American children are influenced by their parents careers and 85% of those parents spend more than 60% of their salaries to provide a suitable environment to their children. Therefore, it seems clear that
literate parents have a strong effect on their children tendencies.
On the other hand, some people think that there is no relationship between the literature of parents and the success of their children. They think that intelligence could exist at any home and there is no specific factors that relates the parents literature with the success of their son. But these people are unaware of the fact that the literature parents provide a good environment to their children either through put them in a good school or through provide them with a good materials which enable their children to improve their capabilities and become a successful people in the future. Thus, literature parents provide a better source for success to their children rather than the illiterate parents.
This essay discussed the reasons why the children of literature people have a better chance to success more than the children of illiterate parents. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the environment of the house and the educational achievements of parents have a strong impact on the success of children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to becoming'.
Suggestion: to becoming
...heir parents jobs and they look forward to become like them in the future. Recent study, ...
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Line 6, column 240, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...is no specific factors that relates the parents literature with the success of their so...
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Line 6, column 481, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'material'?
Suggestion: material
...ool or through provide them with a good materials which enable their children to improve ...
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Line 8, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rong impact on the success of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1207.87684729 147% => OK
No of words: 342.0 242.827586207 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72230387878 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423976608187 0.580463131201 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1411931909 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.384615385 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239074323632 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114672832566 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565022897722 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162517222706 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348137552083 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.