Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio, and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?
Recently, the role of mass media in our lives has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the Pros and Cons of mass media in our lives?" Whereas it is a widely held view that mass media has a negative effect in our lives, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the sociological standpoint, mass media are bound up inextricably with television, which indicates they lead to both advertisement and general knowledge. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between source of information and radio channles as well as an exponential increase in false information. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of entertainment activity is correlated positively with not only social media but also watching movies.
Within the realm of information technology, without the slightest doubt, digital media attribute to broadband connection, in that it would come down to easy access, braodcasting, and vast information. A salient example of such attribution is newspaper, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take marketing scope for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint shortage time in others field of individual's life problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of internet to providing a perfect invironment for information communication.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the mass media including TV, radio, and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52684563758 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20778164301 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 139.433497537 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661073825503 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5676927316 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.727272727 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274840820854 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725721911732 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120702133305 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156359793831 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115568899088 0.0609392437508 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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