In today’s world of evolving technology and global economy, we, as human beings are required to have the knowledge and skills to adapt to the fast-changing workplace and the world. Every sphere of our life has been enhanced by technology. And it is essential that we should learn new standards and techniques to be successful in our career and achieve financial independence.
We are living in the 21st century and everyone wants to get higher living standards, give a better future to their children and improve resources to interact with a global society. To make a prominent place in society and for a successful professional life, people work hard and spend too much at work in result to compromise their personal family life. And to no surprise, most of the people are very well aware that they are spending too much time at work.
The theory of work and life balance is essential here. This theory requires to create a balance between work (career, goals) and life (family, health, pleasure). It does not mean you should devote majority or half of your time to personal space, but to spare some time for own life too. The overtime spent at workplace leads to exhaustion, stress, nervousness and lifestyle diseases. Some organization conducts workshops and seminars on life skills education to improve all aspects of their employee’s life like health, relationship, personal life.
To conclude, in the run to make our lives better, people are compromising with their personal life. Ironically, people want to succeed in their professional life to spend some time with their family members.
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 62
- Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 11
- Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 55
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 72
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
...is essential here. This theory requires to create a balance between work career, goals an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79875881558 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2855886316 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 7.25397266985 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299958135738 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107472934513 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941873312149 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172209055575 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962493484493 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.