Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Obesity is a problem in rich coumtries such as UK,US,Canada,Australia etc.
one of the prime reason for this state is people in rthese countries are mostly into mild work. immigrants are mostly employed into all the heavy body works. This style of living for the native people in the rich countries attribute more for the obesity.
to add more onto this, obesity starts right from the childwood as they are growwing up feeding largely on fast foods.parents has to take the major responsibilty of this habbit of the childrens.
Childrens beside taking fast foods are more into indoor games especially video games than prefering outdoor games.there is nothing more to reason out than these to prove child obesity.
As they grew up with this life style they are far from the determinatiomn of losing wieght.
As we compare the life styles of developing nation to rich countries one of the big difference we could see is the food habits.
In developimng nation people could not offer fast foods and colas so they stick to thier native foods even for the snacks, which eventually is very healthy. on the other hand the burgers,pizzas,colas are the main foods almost all the days in rich countries.
These fast foods are relatively very high in calories.
For e.g if we compare a standard breakfast of south indian vs continental breakfast, it will prove the calorie intake is much higher with comntinental breakfast, which is the choise of the so called rich countries.
Inidan menu breakfast.
4 Idlis with sambar or cocunut chutney --->not be more than 200 calories
1 Tea --50 calorie
Continental break fast --minimum 500 calories, this proves very much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01438848921 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87232411933 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8449475178 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911234679237 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330142506623 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439794096645 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297014020992 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417797801272 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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