Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In this day and age, due to spending too much time at work, many people do not have enough time for their personal life. Although working a lot regarded as thoroughly positive and beneficial to create better future and fulfill their life by a considerable number of people, there are a number of people with an opposing viewpoint. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to decline working more than enough. At first, by working too much time people can reach to further money to support their family. But money is not everything. In addition to the money, being beside each other and spending a time together for family members is mentally useful. For example, in Japan many of individuals because of working lot of time get depressed and many of them commit suicide.
In addition, working hard is for high income to get to a great house, lux car and well-being. All of these facilities are for family comfort but what profit, if there is no time to use them beside family. In my experience, when I was a student, I had a classmate with a wealthy parent but because of having not enough time from them in the house, he always was protesting of feeling lonely.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling debates about this topic, my personal sentiment is that though spending too much time at work have profits in money, it could make us away from family and have to boring life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62213740458 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4377124862 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56106870229 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3129354973 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427789730188 0.242375264174 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146728836475 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105251564582 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255634239169 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855850177673 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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