Television is one of the greatest inventions of mankind. Further, innovations and inventions in the area of media broadcast and information technology have changed the way watch TV, hence, it is integral and become an essential part of human life, and a bridge to spread news and awareness. Moreover, for many, it acts like a companion of life, who stays away from family and friends due to hectic travel.
To begin with, we cannot negate the importance of TV due to its ability to connect the remote destinations. It can stream live news and information from foreign destinations. It is also capable of providing educational contents. For instance, I learn a great deal of forest and marine ecosystem by watching an informative program on the discovery channel. Furthermore, We can know about the history and rich foreign cultures and society on TV.
On the other hand, TV is like a companion for people, stying away from their friends and families due to constant travel for employment and study. For example, after doing a day's hard work we can watch TV and get relaxed by watching music, movies or live sporting events. Thus, it can be a partner for life.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that TV is not only perceived as on-demand entertainment and information purposes but also become a real-life partner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ent and study. For example, after doing a days hard work we can watch TV and get relax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94247787611 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85352949691 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0068797058 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244596657659 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777840440281 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602926445786 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142732492157 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067077625605 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.